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Friday, 28 July 2017

Plants

Plants
No green
No leaves
No pollen
No food
.Flowers lost From each branch,Leaves brown as dark as dirt.
Leftover leaves ruffles as the Wind blows, no other movement is Made.
Plant stays still laying there.
No fruit
No colour
No roots
No life.

For topic we are learning about the land, sea and sky. I wrote this poem about a dead plant.



2 comments:

  1. Hi Lara
    Hows your day going so far?
    I really liked how you described the dead plant.
    Keep it up.
    Bye.

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  2. Hi Ava,
    Thanks for the comment.My day is going great! Bye

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