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Friday 25 August 2017

Dolphins

Dolphins

Dolphins are like a dog. Something that is playful.
They are blue, white and cute. They like swimming in the 
sea. In the deep ocean sea, where other sea creatures
live. Some dolphins love and others don't. Dolphins live 
all around the world , in a herd of 12.
You will be surprised at how much types of dolphins
there are.

2 comments:

  1. Hey Lara,
    My name is Caitlin and I am a student at Waikowhai Primary school Te Waka Ako. I really love your Dolphin Paragraph because even though it is small it still lets me know what the story is about. Your story made me think about all the kinds of story's that we wrote like that. Maybe next time you could probably add a little bit more or some more adjectives or verbs. Also you could maybe add pictures to it to make it more fun to look at.Are Dolphins your favourite? .if you would like to check out my blog it is http://wpscaitlinn.blogspot.co.nz/. Blog U later=)

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  2. Hi Caitlin
    Dolphins are my favourite animal. Thank you for your suggestions and maybe I will do that next time. Bye

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