Hi there, my name is James and I am a student in room Hauraki at Waikowhai Primary School. I really like how you said that you play with your friends and you are a year 6 like me. It made me think of the time that we had to do the same thing telling what we like and how old you are. Have you thought about writing more about what you did and write more in your blog post . If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http:/wpsjamesp. blogspot.co.nz.
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Hi there, my name is James and I am a student in room Hauraki at Waikowhai Primary School. I really like how you said that you play with your friends and you are a year 6 like me. It made me think of the time that we had to do the same thing telling what we like and how old you are. Have you thought about writing more about what you did and write more in your blog post . If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http:/wpsjamesp. blogspot.co.nz.
ReplyDeleteHi James,
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comment James.I will think of more things to write. Thanks.