Cyclone Gita
If I Were Cyclone Gita
If I were Cyclone Gita,I would ramage through the streetsAnd pour heavy rain over the housesCars and animals.I would rob the trees from the ground.While blowing into the windows of the Houses, beating them.I would cut the power.And when the Sun tries to push me away I would bring my friends to go to the ocean whileLeaving a trail of destroyed houses and trees.
Hi Lara, I'm Bruno from Waikowhai Primary School. I really like your blog post about Cyclone Gita and what you would do if you were it. It made me think about how Gita hit NZ a couple of weeks ago but luckily it didn't hit Auckland that bad. Maybe next time you could put some pictures to make it a little bit more exciting. If you would like to check out my blog again here it is wpsbrunoa.blogspot.co.nz
ReplyDeleteHi Bruno,
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comment. I will try find some pictures.Thanks.
Hi Lara,
ReplyDeleteI'm Ruby from PCS,
This is a very descriptive piece of writing. I can really tell what is going on. I love the language used but maybe next time check your full stops' and commas',
From RUBY